【0508雅思写作段落训练】Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 

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Artificial intelligence has become one of the heated topics in recent years（切记不要写套话来引起备受争议的话题）, and the press coverage（重复） about it has impress（完成时态） the public very much. Some people show a positive attitude towards it （代词指人工智能还是报道？指代不清）and expect its benefits （搭配不地道）to our lives, while others are concerned about the consequence （effects）it would bring about （写bring 即可）. 6分

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Artificial intelligence partly gains increasing popularities and partly raises subconsciously doubts. 细化思维代替学生空洞的表达When it comes to attitudes toward its development, Some people show a positive feedback and prepare for artificial application to our lives, while others are concerned about the effects it would bring. 

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People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.（细化思维，由“人们”细化为个人）