【0408雅思写作段落训练】Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?  

学生版本：

In my opinion, recycling waste from homes depends on everyone’s sense of consciousness (individual consciousness). We cannot impose the way of recycling to others who don’t want to do it. If the government makes it a legal requirement, those (代词应是代词离它最近的名词，上文最近的名词是government，但你应该是想说人们。指代不清)may take the feeling （什么意思?）that the government is forcing (一般现在时即可) them to do some unnecessities (something unnecessary) while the rate of recycling are (单数is) not enough. In my mind, only when people realize the importance of recycling can this problems be solved.  

8分版本：

In my view, a new recycling law would be just one possible way to tackle the waste problem. Governments could make it a legal obligation for householders to separate all waste into different bins. There could be punishments for people who fail to adhere to this law, ranging from a small fine to community service, or even perhaps prison sentences for repeat offenders. These measures would act as a deterrent and encourage people to obey the recycling law. As a result, the improved behavior of homeowners could lead to a clean, waste-free environment for everyone.