Happiness is considered to be very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Almost thirty years ago, Bhutan created the Happiness Index（这么难的表达你在考场能表达出来吗？太过于小众化的话题有的时候对于展开一个普遍的议论文话题，效果并不好)。 However, it is not likely to give a certain definition about happiness. To the best of my knowledge, everyone has his or her own criteria of happiness.（最好构建出批判性思维的对比句型能够增强句子和句子之间的连贯度）

To begin with, with respect to the meaning of happiness, there may be a thousand kinds of happiness in a thousand people’s eyes. （it would be extremely demanding for us to define the terminology accurately.） According to the interview made by China Central Television, some people consider earning much money as the essence of happiness, some think staying with family members is happiness, while others claim that health is equal to the term “happiness”. Even the Nobel Laureate MoYan answered this question without certainty. As far as I am concerned, people can hardly reach a consensus on “What is happiness”because they have different criteria in mind. （整体语法没有问题，但是该段用的都是中国式的例子等，建议修改掉，会让考官困惑的）

In addition to definition, “How to achieve happiness” may also deserve a discussion. Admittedly, acquiring happiness is a quite complicated problem, but I still have figured out two possible solutions.(很好，这个让步是很好的表达)  First and foremost, be content with what you have.（写议论文是不能写you ,更不能直接写祈使句的）  Take Buddhism as an example, Master Sheng Yen says“contentment is the beginning of happiness.” Only if you are satisfied写议论文是不能写you ,更不能直接写祈使句的with what you already have can you restrain the endless desires which may eventually destroy happiness. Furthermore, achieve happiness by helping others（动词原形，不能做主语的，而且这个句子也不通啊） . Kind behaviors may provide you with a sense of gratification and happiness. As Jean de La Bruyere says “the optimal approach to get satisfaction is to give other people satisfaction. Helping others may in return give you a feedback of gratification and happiness. Hence, you may be able to reach to happiness by being content with what you have and by helping other people. 写议论文是不能写you ,更不能直接写祈使句的，而你从头到尾都是祈使句和you开始的句型。

Generally speaking, the pursuit for happiness has been kept for centuries. （不要写这些不理性的语言在议论文中） Although the essence and exact definition of happiness are still a research focus of many psychologists, anthropologists and sociologists, I believe that people have their own criteria of “what is happiness” and “how to achieve happiness”.（口号式的语言）

总体口号式语言使得作文逻辑和CC 减分，另外写议论文是不能写you ,更不能直接写祈使句的，而你从头到尾都是祈使句和you开始的句型，使得作文的语法和用词减分，总体上该篇作文是5.5分，说实话，你把我说的都没有使用出来啊。